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Chapter 1 - the girl of the braislet

this is the first episode of my fan - fic hope you like it

Chapter 1 - the girl of the braislet

Chapter 1 - the girl of the braislet
Yugi was sick this day so yami took his place, and the way to school atem dosnt look where hes going and bumps into a he look at her and see's a small about 12 or 13 years, she goes without sayin anything and atem getes to look at a strange object in her arms and goes an...
after school atem see's the in the door of the school she apologises and give atem the Dark Magician and says "Sorry but you dropt this when I bumpt into you", Atem says "Oh no problem" the told atem 2 "im sorry for taking your card wanna go to some place to get out the wary tomarrow?" Atem says "oh well yes ok" before she leaves atem asks "whats yourr name" she said "Kare, Kare Ginomoto whats yours?" he says "Yugi" ,she says "Ok Yugi see you tomarrow", but before she leaves she gets hit by a boy and tells her "Give me all your cards" Kare was about to give the boy her cards when Atem challages to a duel...
at first the guy seems weak but surprises atem with Zoa, but atem uses a combo with Dark Magician and Magical Cylinders and beat him now Kare wants to know more abouth him and atem about her strange braclet that has the Millenium Eye...

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WhatevaYaoiGal on January 6, 2007, 2:58:18 AM

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WhatevaYaoiGalThis is GOOD!!!!!

But I'm gonna be a critic...but can you please put full stops cause I get stuck in the story and I have no idea where I'm reading.
And also....umm...how old are you? I just wanna know...I'm not a stalker....trust me...I'm not ^__^;;

Anyways......good chapter
*gives you cookies*