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Chapter 2 - none yet

this is my second story in a trilogy of amazingness. i hope u all like

Chapter 2 - none yet

Chapter 2 - none yet
I feel sick to my stomach so I quickly crack through the slabs of rock surrounding me. As soon as I break through the last wall I fall to the ground and start coughing up blood and I remember how much I hate using Drel’s power. I roll onto my back to catch my breath. “I really need to learn how to use these powers without the after affects.”
As I lay here recovering from all that coughing I try to make a plan about where to go. Well, I need to get out of Finra. I can’t go to Lycia, that’s where this whole thing started. Don’t want to go back to the Urzig Empire, its really depressing there. So that takes out the Zuran Estates. That just leaves me with Myr’es, and if I really don’t want to get caught I could go to The Dragon’s Jaw. That might be a little extreme though, and might attract some attention seeing how nobody goes there.
That settles it. I’ll make my way to Myr’es, and if gets bad along the way I can book passage to The Dragon’s Jaw from there.
Now which way is East?
I look around for any indications but find none. I try to peer through the canopy but the trees have too many leaves on them to see the sun from down here. Guess I need to climb up and see what I can see.
As I climb higher in the tree I get a sinking feeling in my gut as I realize it’s high noon so the sun is right above me.
Great, I just climbed this tree for nothing now I have to wait an hour or two just to tell which way is east.
“What to do now?” and at that my stomach replied.
“Ha, guess that settles that.” So I start climbing down trying not to fall and I try to think of the local wildlife in the area, it would help if I knew where I was, but I don’t know any. I also realize that I don’t have anything to hunt with.
By the time I get to the ground I decide that it would be a waste of time for me to try and hunt and that the most effective, however risky, thing to do is find a town. It shouldn’t be to far though; the road is very wide and packed down. The only thing I have to avoid is going to Finra.
So I start my trek with nothing but the body of my fallen opponent and a plan to get into any village.
I am happy to find a village not far down the road and as they notice me I quicken my pace and begin to yell with panic in my voice.
“ This man is dead!”
“What’s the big deal about that?”
“I think it was Nyte!”
“What!? Why do you think that?”
“This man was lying on the on the ground with a huge spike of earth through the middle of his chest and there where giant walls of earth surrounding a single spot making it inaccessible but for where it was cracked through!”
“Damn, That sounds like Nyte’s doing,” what does he mean by that “Open the gate!”
I am in. Crap who am I? I need to think of a new name quickly!

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killerrabbit05 on July 18, 2008, 2:12:05 PM

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killerrabbit05Pretty good story... although I am having trouble with some of the places and details of the world and all... it would be nice to gain some insight into the type of world your character is in so we don't feel so... left in the dark? And also, in Chap 1 I had a hard time telling who was speaking in the dialogues... maybe more description might help??

Nyte on July 18, 2008, 2:23:58 PM

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Nyteyea i think i might just type a whole background someday

garaworshiper on July 15, 2008, 4:30:06 PM

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garaworshipercool, so why did he carry his dead opponnt around again? what happened to the rest of the people who were in that party? i know, i have alot of questions ^_^

Nyte on July 15, 2008, 4:32:57 PM

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Nytethats good news for me all i can say is that there is a reason for everything that seems askew and some will be explained in the 3rd or 4th chapter i think but i can tell u in private if u cant wait cause it might be awhile

Yvette on July 14, 2008, 10:20:08 AM

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YvetteThis one is okay but still great writing.

Nyte on July 14, 2008, 12:40:20 PM

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Nyteyea i know its really only like half the chapter or so i was just wanting to put something else out there